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There was a girl who didn't seem to exist 
In either time or space. 
The world spun without a care.
It's like she wasn't. Even. There. 

It was like she was a chill in the night
That ran up people's spines, 
But no one ever noticed her 
And her visibility to others continued to decline. 

She felt like she existed- 
But that was just a lie. 
Because one night as she watched the world 
In the shadows 
She let out her final cry. 

And so the girl who didn't exist
Became a whisper in the night 
And her sorrowful whispers haunt my mind 
Every. Single. Night. 
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Star-chaser97 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
Love it! I an so connect...
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oakleafninja23 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
:)
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littleblueraccoon Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012  Student Writer
It sounds almost like a song in some places. Really cool! It gave me a good chill.
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oakleafninja23 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2012
Thank you! :D
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WhereICallHome Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I really like this btw. Amazing!
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oakleafninja23 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
Thank you!
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WhereICallHome Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome ^_^
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oakleafninja23 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
:)
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WhereICallHome Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How do you make words bold on here??
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oakleafninja23 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2012
When you edit it, there's an option to bold it. You just have to highlight the word(s) that you wanna bold and press the bold b on the top.
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